michaelgriffith (michaelgriffith) wrote,
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Experimenting with poetic form

Suzanne Brooke asked me to comment on her Ekphrastic poem .... I took one of her stanzas and worked on shaping it visually and physically.
Here is her stanza (check it out in context on April 28th: http://maryhope.livejournal.com/):

Staring left and right
Wondering which is better

To stay in the past
Or
To embrace the future

Here is my reworking..... the question is does shape add meaning???? What do you think> TRIPLE CLICK TO SEE THE TEXT IN FULL SIZE:
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