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Early Morning to Work- Crossing the Iron-Cove Bridge by Train 6am - MG: LITERATURE&LIFE

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Dawnlight freshens the world anew
Cool, orange glow over Olympic Park
The river glows
Early morning skiffs
Oars suspended over the glaze
Rest
Taking in the morning's
Halo of blessings.
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From:karliefarlie
Date:June 1st, 2005 04:05 am (UTC)
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I really like the last 2 lines of your poem! There's just something about the morning that I just can't put my finger on... it's so peaceful! I think "halo of blessings" describes it very well though.
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From:michaelgriffith
Date:June 1st, 2005 12:33 pm (UTC)
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Thanks Karlie- writing these few lines just helped me to deepen my appreciation of what was happening around me... I think that is what poetry is for...
Cheers
MG
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